Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 7 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''The Great! The Fortress In Frozen Volcano Keep!''





Chapter Seven: The FolkTale!

Kohaku: ''I... Am I... Am I finnaly going to meet my end?''
Guard: ''Heh, that right scum, you'll never get to Makoto the great.''
Kohaku: ''Seriusly, why do you follow a douche like Makoto?''
Guard: ''He's going to kill everyone in his way... And i'm not gonna die.''
Kohaku: ''Heh, he controls people with fear tactics, huh? Pathetic exuse for a leader.''
Meanwhile...
Kamimasu: ''What should we do!''
Aggro: ''We have to save him!''
Kamimasu: ''If he lost what can we do!?''
Aggro: ''Darn, your right...''
???: ''Heh, the boy is in danger is he, very well then i will assist!''
Aggro: ''Who's there!?''
Magic: ''Ni hao!''
Aggro: ''Its the guy who put us asleep!
Kamimasu: ''Ni hao? I didn't know you were chinese.''
(From my sources i have heard that ''Ni hao'' is a form of greeting in china!!!!!!!)
Magic: ''That right, but i was adopted by japanese perents and raised japanese with a japanese name.. and i'm here to help!''
Magic vanished.
Aggro: ''Did he go to save Kohaku?''
Kamimasu: ''I'm not sure... But i'm not willing to take that risk!''
They ran towards the castle entrance!
Meanwhile!
Magic has broken in the castle he defeated guard after guard with alot of different spells.
Magic: ''You are blinded my foolish fellow humans... Blinded by fear of your liege!''
He entred the dungeon.
Kohaku: ''Magic!''
Magic: ''Its time to tell you my true name!... I am... Hakudoshi the spellcaster!''
(Hakudoshi means ''(Insert meaning of the word here!)'' in Japanese!!!!!!!)
(Malcolm: ''I finnaly got a fitting name!'')
Kohaku: ''Just get me out of here, my execution is in one hour!''
Hakudoshi: ''Of course, friend.''
Kohaku and Hakudoshi escaped the castle.
But when they got out, they saw a sign, that was where Kamimasu and Aggro were standing before Hakudoshi apeared.
Hakudoshi: ''What does the sign say?''
Kohaku: ''It says: ''This is a message from Makoto the great! Not that you are worthy, vile creatures! I have taken your sevants and will kill them within 4 days! Come to my main fortess The Great in Frozen Volcano Keep! Then we'll gladly let them live if you die! Muhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!'' Thats what exacly what it says.''
Hakudoshi: ''Will you rescue them?''
Kohaku: ''What are you talking about of course i will!''
Hakudoshi: ''The we gotta hurry!''
Kohaku: ''Exacly! Lets go!''
They returned to the town they saved from Makoto's grasp!
They told them they requested help.
They made up a plan.
And the towns people and the heroes all set of on different paths to Frozen Volcano Keep!
When they arived he met Hakudoshi.
Kohaku: ''Hey, you made it.''
Hakudoshi: ''Yeah, you too i see.''
Kohaku: ''How is the situation?''
Hakudoshi: ''This intire place is a gigant volcano, but instead of lava... Its ice... The lava has been frozen, heh, this proves the folktales about this place is right.''
Kohaku: ''Folktales?''
Hakudoshi: ''Theres a nearby town with alot of history, but theres also a folktale about it, It goes like this.''
Hakudoshi started to tell the tale passed down through generations...
Seventeenthousand years ago, This place was an active valcano, guarded by a beast that had the power to control it. People made a village here, becasue they thought they would be protected by the beast from the volcanos hidden rage. The people paid tribute to the beast every year to keep its anger at bay. But after many generations, the people of the city thought that it was no more need to pay their respect to the beast because they tought that the volcano would never erupt.
But after 50 years of nobody paying tribute to the beast. It showed itself! It was a silver wolf, with red eyes! It gave up a big howl that caused the volcano to erupt. The people thought they would die! But then a fox spirit in human form showed up, it was dressed in a white kimono, and she had empty eyes. This vixen fox, used a spell the caused a wave of frost to sweep over the volcano, freezing the entire volcano and the mountain around it. When it was over the fox was standing, and the beast was gone... the fox went into a cave on the mountain and inside they saw the beast frozen. Then the fox said: ''You humans are disgusting, you have given up on your traditions, and old culture. You should be ashamed, you need to work for a better future or you'll destroy this world in the process of your own stupidity!'' Then they let the fox speak with one of their leaders. Then after the talk they said the fox vanished after giving his blood line premission of demon hunters to rule the city by himself.
Hakudoshi: ''And thats the story. Hmph, foolish fox, she gave that dictator Makoto's blood line alot power undeserved power.''
Kohaku: ''I see... Sounds like a stupid story, now lets go, we only have 3 days to get to the randevous point, infltrate, rescue them, get out, hide and escape with them.''
Hakudoshi: ''But they haven't showed up yet... Someone's coming, hide!''
The hid behind a frozen stone nearby.
FirstGuard: ''This executing is going to be great!''
SecondGuard: ''But i heard its going to be a week late.''
FirstGuard: ''Of course i heard that it was anounced by Makoto himself!''
Kohaku thinking: ''Perfect...''
Aftet they left Kohaku decided to go of somewhere, he had something he needed to do.
Hakudoshi: ''Ok, good luck my friend.''
Kohaku: ''I'll be back in 7 days, we do have 10 days you know.''
Hakudoshi: ''Alright, you can count on me to set up the plan when they get here!''
Kohaku: ''Fare Thee Well for now...''
Kohaku jumped away!
He went of to a nearby waterfall, far away enough, so the guards will not find him find him.
He spent those seven days training.
Alot of training, the only time he ever took a break was when he passed out.
He kept training again when he woke up.
He was going to be stronger... He must make up for his loss at the Makotos castle... He MUST become stronger!

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 6 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!

MalcolmX: ''Well?... What are you waiting for?... Just start reading the damn story already!''




Chapter Six: Choise!

Ruby used fox fire!
Yami jumped!
(Malcolm: ''If your wondering what happend... They found Yami and are trying to take the MXZ armor back.'')
Yami: ''I may not be able to use the armor!... But i can keep it away from you!''
Yami dropped Isamu's heartless, even though its transformed into X the sword of forever, Hotaru, Chiyo and the others aren't fused with it... It just stayed that form.
Then trying to get it back Yami drpped the others by mistake!
M the armor! X the sword! And Z the shield!
And the wepons fused into MXZ!
MXZ: ''I have awakend!''
MXZ: ''I WILL PROTECT THIS WORLD FROM EVIL!''
Isamu: ''Thats great, but can i have my sword back!''
MXZ: ''NO, its mine!''
Isamu: ''I had it first!''
MXZ: ''Kid... Come back when you have lived for thousands of years.''
Isamu: ''How many thousands of years have you lived?''
MXZ: ''Dont make me say it!''
Isamu: ''Say it!''
MXZ: ''*Sigh* Ok... Here goes...''
MXZ: ''Its Over Ninthousaaaaaaaaaaaand!''
Isamu: ''What Ninthousand!''
MXZ: ''There you happy!''
(Malcolm: ''Dont complain MXZ! Your lucky you even got back in the story!'')
MXZ: ''Ok, if we're done breaking the fourth wall... Lets get on with the plot!... Ok what was my lines again?... Oh, yeah... Yami! You are evil, there for you will die!''
Saito: ''Hey, i'm EVI-''
Ruby: ''Shut up, Saito!''
Yami: ''I'd better withdraw!''
Yami vanished!
MXZ: ''Anyway, if you need me i'll be fighting evil, see ya!''
MXZ left!
Ruby: ''Hmph, not even a thank you for reviving him!''
Kohaku came!
Ruby: ''Hey, its that Kohaku guy.''
Akurei: ''Who?''
Ruby explained about the brief meeting they had.
Kohaku: ''Have you seen a guy named Makoto around?''
Sakura: ''Why would anyone wanna be looking for him?... EVER?''
Kohaku: ''To kill him.''
Hotaru: ''Makes sence.''
Kohaku: ''Have you seen him around lately?''
Kiyoshi: ''Sorry no.''
Kohaku: ''We'll be going then come on Aggro and Kamimasu.''
Ruby: ''Take care.''
Kohaku and his companions kept going.
After a while, they ended up at a castle.
Kamimasu: ''We should not continue, this castle is the kingdom that rules over all the citys nearby.''
Kohaku: ''So Makoto must be conected to this place.''
Kamimasu: ''Of course he is the knight of this castle.''
Aggro: ''Not a very noble one.''
Kohaku: ''He must have alot of body guards... We have to expect a challenge.''
Kohaku: ''You must stay out here... You'll only get in my way in mid battle... I fight best alone.''
Aggro: ''Hmph, fine.''
Kamimasu: ''Getting in your way, huh... I can fight too! But fine i'll stay.''
Kohaku: ''Sorry... I'll be gonig in now...''
He broke down the castle door!
Knocked out the guards by the entrance!
And met 7 more guards!
He used Wolf Howl and got by them!
Then at an open place, met 100 guards!
He charged them!
Took out 8 in 2 seconds!
Slashed 12 more!
Took down 40 with a Wolf Howl!
And the last 40 with another Wolf Howl!
He met one of the body guards of Makoto!
He slashed with his claws!
The guard ducked!
Kohaku kicked him into the wall!
Another of the guards met him!
Kohaku started to brake the castle around him!
After he stopped the guard was trapped under the rubble!
It turned out Makoto has fled the castle!
On the way out he met 100.000 guards.
(Malcolm: ''The castle is very big and mainly aims on military perfection thats why its so many of them.'')
Kohaku defeated 3000 and then he was to wiped out to continue fighting.
He collapsed and when he woke up he was in the dungeon, waiting execution.
He was beat up and had chains everywhere preventing him from escaping.
Kohaku howled!
He howled in a spiritual languege saying that he was captured in the dungeon, and was soon going to be executed, he also told them to flee.
Aggro heard this!
Aggro explained what happend to Kamimasu.
They didn't know what to do.
Go try to save him.
Or follow his advice to run.
They had to chose.

To Be Continue!!!!!!!

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 5 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''The Town....... How in the name is continuity did the snow disapear so fast!?''



Chapter Five: The Heroic Jerk Vs The Tyrrany Of The Douche!

They arived at the town!
A little orphan walked up to Kohaku.
Orphan: ''Can you please give me some money sir?''
Kohaku: ''...''
Orphan: ''Please sir.''
Kamimasu thinking: ''Doesn't he feel bad ignoring the little child!''
the fox thinking: ''Is he heartless!''
Kohaku thinking: ''I... Really dont have any money, but i dont wanna disapoint the kid.''
Kohaku gave the fox a look showing that he wants help.
the fox ran behind a corner, and came out in human form.
Fox: ''Honey, you forgot your money!''
She came out with a big bag full of gold coins.
Orphan: ''Wow, mister you're rich.''
the fox gave the bag of money to Kohaku.
Fox thinking: ''Now, what will you do, wolf.''
Kohaku gave the bag of money to the orphan.
Kohaku: ''Share it with other poor people...''
Orphan: ''Thank you mister... Um, sorry i never got your name.''
Kohaku: ''Kohaku...''
Orphan: ''Mister Kohaku i will tell everyone of your kindness, i got to hurry and hide before the tyrant Makoto comes and take it away from me.''
Kohaku: ''Makoto, huh... Tell me more...''
Orphan: ''Then lets hide first. follow me!''
Fox and Kamimasu thinking: ''Well, he was kind after all!''
The later arived at an underground hideout, full with orphan kids and poor adults.
Orphan: ''This is where we all hide, we come here to escape Makoto.''
Kohaku: ''Does Makoto own the town or something?''
Orphan: ''He comes here to collect taxes, but the texes has become so expencive that everyone has gone poor.''
Kohaku: ''That explains alot... Haven't you made a stand?''
Orphan: ''He's to strong and we're keep getting weaker...''
Kohaku: ''I understand... I'll help you beat him!''
Everyone looked at Kohaku!
Kohaku: ''I'm strong i can win, piece of cake!
The elder came out.
Elder: ''We dont want any help, leave our city at once!''
Kohaku: ''Your afraid that if he catches me alive he will get information about where your hideout is, your also afraid if i try to beat him and lose he will raise taxes even more...''
Elder: ''Then you understand, Now leave!''
Kohaku: ''I beat him once... He escaped thats what kept him alive.''
Elder: ''You really beat him!?''
Kohaku: ''Yup!''
Elder: ''Then... We'll give you a chance!''
Kohaku: ''I wont fail you!''
An hour later!
Makoto entred the town.
And was soon going to end up where Kohaku stod ready.
Kohaku: ''Hey, fox girl.''
Fox: ''Yes?''
Kohaku: ''What did you mean earlier when you refered to me as ''honey''?''
She blushed.
Fox: ''We-well, um...''
Kohaku: ''And how did you get so much money that fast.''
Fox: ''Well some fox spirits can conjure up items out of thin air, but for the item to stay, the fox must be happy, so i said honey-Woops!''
Kohaku: ''I see, a conjuring fox huh.''
Fox: ''Y-yeah but because of that i cant fight very good... I've never been a fighter anyway.''
Fox thinking: ''Just say it!''
Fox: ''Kohaku I-''
Makoto came around the corner meeting them!
Makoto: ''You again!''
Kohaku: ''Lets just skip the ''hello, how are you'' part and get on with the fight!''
Makoto: ''You read my mind... Therefore it was my idea! Haha, i came up with it first i am way smarter tha-''
Kohaku: ''Shut the fuck up!''
Makoto: ''...Smarter than you!''
Makoto drew heartless and charged Kohaku!
Kohaku: ''It always starts with someone charging someone...''
(Malcolm: ''I just noticed myself it really does!'')
Kohaku kicked Makoto in the face!
Makoto flew back!
The he made some hands signs so quick that nobody could see them!
He slamed his hands together!
Kohaku: ''Wolf Howl!''
A big wolf howl blast shot through his hands!
Knocking Makoto hard into a wall!
Kohaku went up to Makoto and helped him up.
Kohaku: ''I'll kill you now...''
He preapred to crush his head in the wall.
But Makoto quickly recovered and got away from him.
Makoto started to run!
Makoto: ''No way i'm coming back here!''
Kohaku: ''Darn, him... Damn coward!''
Everyone came out.
The elder came up to Kohaku.
Elder: ''You have saved us all from the tyrrany of Makoto, We will do anything to repay you when we got our budget and strength as a city back!''
Kohaku: ''Yeah, you owe me big time...''
Orphan: ''Thank you for everything!''
Kohaku: ''No problem! Oh and by the way fox girl.''
Fox: ''Yeah?''
Kohaku: ''Conjure enough money for them to get back on track.''
the fox made a pile of gold coins apear.
Fox: ''But i dont know how long they will last.''
Kohaku kissed her.
Fox: ''!!!!!!!''
Kohaku: ''Now they will last.''
Fox: ''S-s-s-s-so you did that just cause you wanted the money to stay?''
Kohaku: ''Yeah, and your also in human form so it was more convinient.''
Fox: ''You jer-...''
Fox: ''...''
Kohaku: ''What the matter, you stopped in midsentence.''
Fox: ''I... I remember something... From my past!''
Kamimasu: ''Well tell us!''
Fox: ''My name... My name is Aggro!''
Kamimasu: ''Aggro? Isin't that a guy name?''
Aggro: ''Did i ask you!?''
Kamimasu: ''And the only ones that has names like that are horse spirits.''
Kohaku: ''Oh, just leave her alone, she recovered a part of her memory, and thats great news.''
Aggro: ''Yeah!''
Kohaku: ''But still... Aggro is a little unusual.''
Aggro: ''Whatever!''
Kohaku: ''Anyway, we're leaving the city now.''
Elder: ''Take care and thank you for everything!''
Kohaku: ''We'll be asking for a favor in return in time... You better repay... Bye!''
They we're given supplies for their journey.
And they left the town!

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 4 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Fire Mah Lazor!....... What?''


Chapter Four: Magic! A Fox With No Memory!

Kohaku tried to punch one of the ninjas!
It was a fake and disapeared!
Fox: ''Only one them are real!''
Kohaku: ''Oh... That makes things more easy!''
Kohaku: ''Rage style! Raibies infected wolf!''
Kohaku started to look more evil, showing teeth, growling and more wolf like!
Kohaku: ''Lets spill some blood!''
One of the ninjas threw 3 throwing knives!
Kohaku caught all three with his mouth and threw them back!
Hit a ninja with each knife!
Now theres only 2 left!
They charged him!
He turned back to normal!
And slashed with his claw!
The last fake disapeared!
The ninja drew a sword and tried to slash him!
He ducked!
Kamimasu came from behind and punched the ninjas back head, making the ninja faint!
Kamimasu: ''I trained Kung-Fu.''
Kohaku: ''Impressive.''
Kohaku went and picked the fox up.
Kohaku: ''Should we eat it?''
Fox: ''N-n-n-no!''
Kohaku: ''... Why?...''
Fox: ''I really dont wanna die.''
Kamimasu: ''Are... Are you talking to a fox?''
Kohaku: ''I'm a spirit, so i can understand it... And secondly its a fox demon.''
Kamimasu: ''How come i cant understand it?''
Kohaku: ''Its speaking spiritual languege.''
Kamimasu: ''I see.''
Fox: ''Um, Will you let me live?''
Kohaku: ''Tell me what happend here, little guy?''
Fox: ''I'm not a gu, i'm a girl.''
Kohaku: ''I dont care, just tell me what happend.''
Fox: ''Well... Um... I... I dont remember!''
Kohaku: ''What?''
Fox: ''The ninja did beat me up kinda badly, i must have amnisia!''
Kohaku: ''Ok never mind.''
He threw the fox to the ground and kept walking making a hand sign showing that Kamimasu she's going to follow.
Fox: ''Wait! I'm alone, nowhere to go and i'm hungry...''
Kohaku stopped.
Kohaku: ''....... *Sigh* Come with us...''
Fox: ''Th-Thank you! My names... Uh... I dont know...''
Kohaku: ''Untill then i guess we'll call you fox.''
Fox: ''Ok!... But... I'm Still hungry...''
Kamimasu: ''Me too.''
Kohaku: ''*Sigh* Fine... We'll stop to eat.''
While Kamimasu and the fox stopped to eat.
Kohaku ran around the area in human form.
Jumping from tree to tree, the snow has started to melt cause of the winters end and it was slippery, but it wasn't a problem for Kohaku.
He stopped cause he saw some humans that we're out hunting.
The were hunting spirits.
They were a part of a religon that thought of spirits as evil creatures.
He came walking out.
The atttacked him with swords.
He jumped up!
On the way down he kicked each one in the head making them faint.
Then he kept on running.
He saw a town.
And he started to run back.
They we're there dont eating, but asleep.
He tried waking them.
But it didn't work.
Then a magician apeared.
Magician: ''I am magic.''
Kohaku: ''Uncreative name!''
(Malcolm: ''I really dont have anything better! DX LOL!'')
Magic: ''Whatever, lets just have a contest in magic power, and if you win... I will wake your friends up from the magic endused sleep.''
Kohaku: ''I thought it was you... Then lets do it!''
Magic used a fire ball spell!
Kohaku countered it with a water shield spell!
Magic: ''So... You have mastered the water element.''
Kohaku: ''Well, we wolf spirit has the power to master elements!''
Magic used some kind of shadowy blob spell!
Kohaku: ''Shadow power!?''
Kohaku: ''Wolf Howl!''
And he slamed his hands together in the last second before Magics spell hit!
And a powerfull beem blasted from his hands, through the shadow spell and hit magic!
Kohaku: ''If i had a little more time i could have atleast used a fourth of my power.''
Magic: ''*Cough* Heh, you win my friend... And your friends will wake up any moment now... Next time we meet... I will tell you my real name...''
(Malcolm: ''I'll think of something ok! ->_->'')
Magic teleported away!
Kamimasu and the fox woke up, he explained everything that happend.
Fox: ''And we were asleep!? Aw i missed everything.''
Kohaku: ''Lets just go already... I found a town futher down lets go.''
Kamimasu: ''Oh really! Thats great!''
They left for the town...

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 3 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: (Wait a minute why do i have to say!? its obvius what it is!!!!!!!) ''Fox''


Chapter Three: Once Enemies, Now Allies!

We begin this chapter with Yami finding Makoto!
Yami: ''Makoto! You're alive!''
Makoto: ''Yes and thanks to the power you gave me when we first met... I am now invinceble! I've even surpassed you!''
Yami thinking: ''Darn! Now he might not serve me!''
Yami: ''But, Makoto, Will you try to repay that favor?''
Makoto: ''No way, i've got what i wanted! Now to seek revenge against Isamu and claim Sakura for myself!''
Yami: ''Hmph, fine!''
Yami thinking: ''Thought so, now i have to find the others.''
Meanwhile!
Saito: ''Hmmm... You know sister... I dont hate you.''
Sapphire: ''I dont hate you too.''
Saito: ''Grrr, why is it so to turn into a good guy!''
Sapphire: ''I know! But if we follow this through, our luck might change!''
Saito: ''I'll turn good... BUT... I will never EVER stop saying, EVIL.''
Sapphire: ''I guess thats allowed to say... I mean the ones we're trying to join are demons after all.''
Saito: ''And a priestess.''
After a while the met up with Ruby and the others.
Ruby and Sapphire: ''You!''
They raised their fists.
Saito: ''Sisters, i'm sure theres a way to-''
They started to stare at him.
He back away without saying a word.
Isamu: ''What is going on!?''
Ryou: ''Do we have to kill you for a third friggin time!''
Saito: ''No, no we're here to join you!''
Hana: ''Yeah right!''
Sakura: ''Then come, join us... Your welcome to anytime.''
Isamu: ''Sa-Sakura? Why?''
Sakura: ''We gotta atleast give them a chance, i mean they surely wouldn't have taken the risk to come here to us unless they had to.''
Sapphire: ''We thought that we always lose to the good guys, and we want to be on the winning team!''
Ruby: ''HmHm... Hehehe... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!''
Saito: ''Whats so funny?''
Ruby: ''Nobody here would have thought you wanted to join us... Exept maybe for Sakura... Welcome my evil siblings!''
Saito: ''*Sniff* What made me most happy was that the Ruby Crystal said Evil.''
Ruby: ''Face it, our crystals are destroyed! I am not the crystal anymore.''
Sapphire: ''Yes yes, i know but before our parents died, they made duplicates of the crystal, knowing you would someday destroy them. Either from abusing power... Or just plainly distroying them... You are the strongest after all.''
Ruby: ''Our parents made more!?''
Ryou: ''Your... Parents?''
Ruby: ''Emerald, and Gold Windpass, are my perents, they created the ruby, sapphire and EVIL crystals and something they didn't count on... Was that we were born with the crystals. They died after using to much power making the crystals.''
Saito: ''By the way, thats the reason i say EVIL all the time... It was the name of the crystal i had... I want my other EVIL crystal and then nobody will take my crystal ever again!''
Sapphire: ''Shut up, fool.''
What the hell are they talking about anyway!?... Uh, i mean, Meanwhile!
Kamimasu: ''Are we there yet?''
Kohaku: ''No.''
Kamimasu: ''*Sigh* Ok...''
Kohaku: ''...''
Kamimasu: ''Hey, Kohaku?''
Kohaku: ''What?''
Kamimasu: ''Are we there ye-''
Kohaku punched Kamimasu!
She fell over!
Kamimasu: ''!!!!!!!''
Kohaku: ''Didn't think i'd hit a girl huh?... Hmph, i hit anyone who anoy me.''
Kamimasu got a nose bleed.
Kamimasu: ''W-w-w-w-w-w-w-why d-did y-y-y-y-y-y-you d-d-d-do tha-that!?''
Kohaku: ''Your constant asking anoyed me''
Kohaku: ''Oh, and you better not wake me up at night unless you have a very good reason.''
Kamimasu: ''Eat dirt asshole.''
Kohaku: ''I'd rather go for fish... Sorry for punching you anyway... Just like that without a warning, It was wrong of me... But, I cant control myself very good when i'm angry or anoyed.''
Kamimasu: ''Well... Aslong as your sorry...''
They saw a injured fox on the ground.
They stopped.
Fox: ''Run away, its a trap!
Kohaku: ''Prepare for an ambush Kamimasu!''
And 5 ninjas came out of the ground!
Ninja: ''Kir-kir-kir!''
Kamimasu: ''Be carefull Kohaku!''
Kohaku: ''Its time... To fight!!!!!!!''
Kohaku howled like a wolf, like a wolf used to howl before they go out to hunt!
Then!
The ninjas charged Kohaku and Kohaku charged them!

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 2 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Wolf Howling!''


Chapter Two: Dance in the moonlight! The Great Vs Wolf Howl! Round One!

Kohaku runs through a snowy plain in wolf form, showing no emotions on the outside... But inside a burning hatred grows.
But he comes to a stop when he sees a human girl standing in the snow.
Kohaku fosters a hatred for all humans, so he starts to show his teeth and growls.
Human: ''Who's... There?''
Kohaku: ''Grrr, your death.''
Human: ''I... see...''
Kohaku: ''Grrr... Did you not hear what i just said?''
Human: ''Yes... Normaly humans would runin fear of getting killed by a demon wolf.''
Kohaku: ''I'm NOT a demon!!! I'm a spirit!''
Kohaku: ''Wait, what did you mean normaly?''
Human: ''Everyone in the world has given up on me... My family was killed, everyone blamed me. So i'm all alone... I would starve to death in time anyway... So kill me if it makes you feel better.''
Kohaku: ''Hmph, Its no point if you want to die... But... My whole pack was killed by a human... So i'm after revenge.''
Human: ''Could it be?...''
Kohaku: ''You know something!? Spill it!''
Kohaku tackled the human to the ground, growling at her, waiting for her to explain.
Human: ''That hurt...''
Kohaku: ''Just tell me what you know!''
Human: ''Not untill you say your sorry.''
Kohaku: ''Wha- Do you know who your dealing with!? Tell me or i'll-''
Human: ''Kill me? Go ahead, then you wont find out anything!''
Kohaku: ''Grrr... Hmph... Ok, I-I'm sorry...''
Human: ''Thats better... My name is Kamimasu.''
(Kamimasu means ''Bite'' in Japanese and is normaly not used as a name!!!!!!!)
Kohaku: ''I really dont care who you are... But... Are you going to tell me or what!?''
Kamimasu: ''Well, i know a human who killed a pack of wolf spirits... But... I dont think its a Human... He was the one who blamed my family's death on me!''
Kohaku: ''Hmm, so we have a common enemy... But if it wasn't a human... What is he?''
Kamimasu: ''Its a human possesed by a demon spirit, and he is growing every day in power... He might even have surpassed the one who gave him his power.''
Kohaku: ''Who is he?''
Kamimasu: ''He calls himself, Makoto the great.''
Kohaku started to show teeth and stared into the clouds.
Kohaku: ''Grrrrrrr... Makoto the great my ass... He will die... Hehe... I finnaly found him... I know who it is... I'll put him to sleep... Forever!''
Then someone came running at blinding speed and stoped not to far away from them.
???: Hehe... Someone called... Now... Prepare to face my wrath! Nobody EVER speaks badly about me behind my back! Even less a demon, and a killer!... I am Makoto the incredible and great!!!!!!!''
Kohaku: ''You're? Makoto?''
Makoto: ''That right!''
Kohaku: ''This guy!?... This little shit!?... Killed my family!''
Makoto: ''I was going to finnish you in time... But why wait, so bring it on!''
Kamimasu: ''You!? You finnaly showed yourself!''
Kohaku: ''Prepare to die, Makoto the lame!''
He transformed into human form.
Then he charged Makoto and his nails turned into claws!
He cut Makoto with his claws so that Makoto's blood splashed everywhere!
He knocked down Makoto with a kick!
Makoto stod up like nothing happend!
Kohaku: ''Why are you still alive!!!!!!!''
He slashed again!
Kohaku: ''Die! Die! Die!''
Makoto drew a swod called Heartless!
He slashed Kohaku!
Makoto: ''Mahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! I've gained immortality!''
Kohaku kicked Makoto in the head making him fly far away!
Kohaku: ''Please dont talk... It makes you look even more stupid!''
(Malcolm: ''Owned!'')
Makoto: ''Why you!''
Kohaku: ''Lets dance in the moonlight!''
Some clouds moved and exposed the moon!
Kohaku: ''I'll show you my strongest attack!''
Kohaku made some hand signs.
Then he streched his arms out and opened his palms wide open!
Then he smashed his hands together!
Kohaku: ''Wolf Howl!''
And a extremly big beem shot out of his hands!
It blasted everything around and left a gigant mark in the ground where the blast was!
Makoto was gone.
Kohaku: ''Darn! He got away!... I was so close... I'll kill you Makoto!''
Kamimasu: ''I'll join you!''
Kohaku: ''I dont need anyone holding me back!''
Kamimasu: ''Please, i'll do anything! Even become your sevant.''
Kohaku: ''You know that means i could just use you, and kill you afterwards.''
Kamimasu: ''Y-yes...''
Kohaku smiled.
Kohaku: ''Your lucky i'm not that kind of person... But i exept... Your my new servant.''
(Malcolm: ''From when Kamimasu said ''I'll join you'', to this point, that part was the original idea for the first story (Kitsune No Ai chapter 1), but i instead took what i could firgure out at that moment. ^_^''
Kohaku and Kamimasu set of to find Makoto and their adventure will now... Begin!

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!) Chapter 1 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Lone Wolf''




Kitsune No Yume! (A Foxes Dreem!)

Chapter One: The Lone Wolf!

The story starts with a lone wolf spirit drinking water at a lake.
It stoped drinking, and put its ears backwards... It heard something.
It looked back.
nothing was there...
Wolf: ''Who's there?...''
A snake demon came out from some bushes.
Snake: ''Just little me, heh heh... How would you like to become all powerful?''
Wolf: ''Not inrested...''
Snake: ''Liar! Everyone wants power!''
Wolf: ''...''
Snake: ''Heh, i see your not denying it...How about it?... Will you make the deal?''
Wolf: ''... No...''
Snake: ''Then you should die!''
The snake turned into a human and drew her sword!
A cover of mist covered the area when it cleared, the wolf was gone.
Snake: ''Darn, how dare he insult the might of Yami!''
Yami: ''But no matter. i still have to find the others... Or was i the only one who lived... Bah! Details Details! I'll worry about that after i regain my full power.''
Meanwhile at a cliff somewhere.
Wolf: ''...''
The wolf spirit turned into a human form.
a boy around 19 years old, gray hair, wolf ears, wolf tail and yellow wolf eyes.
But lets return.
Return to.
One year ago!
At the temple.
Ruby charged with a extremly powerful fox inferno at her target, Yukidomari!
Ruby hit her target!
Yukidomari: ''Ah!... How!? How can you inflict damage on ME!?''
Ruby: ''I cant lose!... This is for my friends!''
Yukidomari attacked Ruby with a tentacle!
Ruby jumped away from the attack and fired another powerful fox inferno!
Yukidomari: ''Argh! I cannot die... I am invincible!''
Ruby: ''Everyone! Lend me your power!''
Ruby charged a fox inferno stronger than the sun!!!!!!!
Ruby: ''Fox Soul Inferno!!!!!!!''
Ruby covered her self with the fire and charged Yukidomari with a tackle that broke through anything in the way!
Ruby hit Yukidomari!
Yukidomari started to blow up!
Yukidomari: ''N-no! This cant be! I cannot be defeated!!!!!!!''
Yukidomari split up into Reisei and Reishi again.
Reisei: ''We've failed to complete our mission... I dont know what to do...''
Ruby: ''I can tell you what you can start with!!!!!!! Stop breathing! Die!''
Reishi: ''Let us live and we'll make one wish come true for you.''
Ruby: ''Good then revive my friends... But!... Dont missunderstand like you did with your other wish!... I dont want them to be zombies, or anything wierd like that, i just want them back like they we're before they got killed!''
Reishi: ''Understod.... They will come back to life any moment now.''
Reisei: ''Untill next time... Farewell...''
They disapeared.
All of Rubys friends came back to life, knowing what happend!
Akurei: ''Life... I failed to see how important it is...''
Ryou: ''Well... Ruby... Thanks to you... We all get to live life!''
Isamu: ''We're truly grateful!''
Ruby: ''But... This is not over...''
Everyone: ''Huh!?''
Hoshi: ''What do you mean!?''
Hayate: ''This is so not smooth to hear!''
Ruby picked up a scroll she found on the ground.
Ruby: ''Its from Yami! She lived!?''
Ruby began reading the scroll.
Ruby: ''You may have gotten me this time, but i'll be back, presistant heroes... PS, i took the MXZ armor.''
Ryou: '' Ok, then...''
Isamu: ''We've gotta...''
Akurei: ''Get going!...''
Ruby: ''Lets go!''
They all charged to the exit with exitement!
One year later back at the cliff.
Ruby came by and saw a wolf spirit in human form standing close to the edge.
Yes, its the same wolf from the beggining.
Ruby: ''You'll fall of if you stand so close to the edge.''
Wolf: ''...''
Ruby: ''You could atleast reply, dont have to be rude.''
Wolf: ''Sorry if i offended you...''
Ruby: ''Well you may be friendly after all.''
Wolf: ''I dunno...''
Ruby: ''You dont talk much do you?''
Wolf: ''No... Since i'm mostly alone i dont have to...''
Ruby: ''So your a lone wolf?... Wheres your pack?''
Wolf: ''... Killed by humans...''
Ruby: ''Oh, i'm sorry...''
Wolf: ''No, you're not...''
Ruby: ''Whats your name?''
Wolf: ''Kohaku...''
(Kohaku means ''Amber'' in Japanese!!!!!!!)
Ruby: ''Well Kohaku, i'm sorry for your loss...''
Kohaku: ''Dont pity me...''
Kohaku jumped away.
Ruby: ''Hmph... And i was just trying to friendly.''
Meanwhile Kohaku is still jupming from stone to stone.
Kohaku thinking: ''I will seek out the one human who killed my pack... And end that humans life!''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!