Saturday, May 16, 2009

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 9 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Heartless''




Chapter Nine: Fox-Wing! Dragon-Slash! Demon-Raid! Light Of The Razor Blade! There i just explained the whole episode just like that!

Isamu (Wolf form) charged Makoto with anger and bloodthirst in his eyes!
He got knocked away like nothing!
And he was still weak from the first battle and couldn't go on.
Isamu had just abandoned all hope, when.
Chiyo started to move.
Isamu turned back into human form.
Isamu: ''You're alive!''
Chiyo: ''I'm happy that you care...''
Isamu: ''Why?... Why did you take the hit?... Because of it, your half dead.''
Chiyo: ''You must attack me with your sword!''
Isamu: ''What?! No, i cant!''
Chiyo: ''Its the only way to win... I saw that your sword has a power that allows the user to fuse it with whomever he choses... And if you do... *Cough*... You will become stronger than ever before, and as an added bonus i'll live.''
Isamu: ''... Fine then!''
He stabbed Chiyo!
Isamu: ''Heartless... Show me what kind of power you have!''
Chiyo and heartless started to glow!
Chiyo transformed into a liquid form and went into heartless.
Heartless started to change shape!
And it became a sword made only of blades resembles fox tails!
Isamu: ''Foxswing...''
Isamu: ''Lets rock!''
He charged Makoto and slashed against him!
He tried to parry!
But he got knocked back into a tree!
Makoto: ''I give up!''
He ran away.
Isamu's sword heartless became normal and Chiyo came out in her fox form.
Chiyo: ''Isamu... You have mastered the power of Knightmare.''
Isamu: ''Knightmare?''
Chiyo: ''Fusing swords-''
Daisuke: ''Sis! Your ok!''
Chiyo: ''You didn't think i would die that easy-''
They heard a big explosion!
Makoto came back with an even bigger sword, but still a Heartless.
Isamu: ''I see... your back... Chiyo, does this power work on anyone?''
Chiyo: ''Yes, i'm 100% sure.''
Kiyoshi: ''Then its my turn!''
Isamu slashed Kiyoshi with the sword!
The same thing that happend to Chiyo happend, but this time the sword turned into two dragon heads, with an axe in the middle!
Isamu: ''This time i'm wielding... Dragonslash!''
Isamu knocked down Makoto like he was a volley ball... Of course volley balls dont exist in old japan...
Makoto ran away and came back later like last time with a bigger sword.
This time Isamu tried it on Hotaru!
The sword turned into a sword, with 5 blades and 2 blades next to them.
Isamu turned the blades into tetacles and tangled up Makoto.
Isamu: ''Heh, its time to face the wrath of demonraid!''
He trew Makoto away.
Then he came back later with an even bigger sword.
Makoto: ''This time you wont win!!!!!!!''
Isamu: ''Sakura, its your turn...''
Isamu slashed Sakura and the sword turned into a sword with out a blade just a sharp looking light.
Isamu cut Makoto's Heartless in half!
Isamu: ''You cant beat, Light Of The Razor Blade!''
Makoto ran away and this time he didn't come back.
Meanwhile...
Makoto: ''Orochi No Yami please forgive me!'' (Orochi No Yami Means ''Snake's Darkness'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Snake: ''You get one more chance... If you dont dispose of Isamu this time... I'll just have to dispose of you!!!!!!!''
Meanwhile...
Ryou had seen the battle between Isamu and Makoto.
Ryou: ''How did Makoto become so strong... But Isamu still outclassed him... And if i'm going to fight Isamu i better get stronger myself.''
Ruby: ''Dont worry... You wont lose, cause i got a plan... But we have to wait a month for it to work.''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 8 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Fennec Fox''
Not My Pic!!!!!!!


Chapter Eight: Kitsune Masion! Wait, isin't that taken already? I think i heard the name somewhere, but i dunno!

Makoto: ''How dare they! How dare they disrespect me!... Me! Can you believe it!''
voice: ''Do you want to stop them?... I can he-''
Makoto: ''Give me all the power i can get!''
voice: ''Greedy... I like that... You are now my servant.''
A black snake came out of nowhere and sunk its teeth in Makoto!...! Thanks snake!
Snake: ''Isamu, You will die...
On the other hand... Maybe we shouldn't thank the snake...
Meanwhile...
Ryou: ''Hmm...''
Ruby: ''Grrr... That Isamu, thinks he can beat you!''
Ryou: ''If that anoying human wouldn't have shown up... I would have been killed... I must beat him.''
Ruby: ''If that Priestess wound have stepped in you would have won!''
Meanwhile...
Outside a mansion in the middle of the forest.
Isamu: ''This place... It feels haunted...''
Sakura shivered.
Sakura: ''B-b-b-by what or who?''
Isamu: ''You hang out with demons and yet your afraid of ghosts... Well it should calm you that this place is haunted by a demon.''
Sakura: ''Is it strong?''
Isamu: ''Beyond, what ever you though was possible... Two of them.''
Sakura: ''Will we survive if we go in?''
Isamu: ''If they are friendly... Lets go say, hi.''
Hotaru: ''What are you crazy! Theres two strong demons in there, and we're going to take a chance that they are friendly!?''
Isamu: ''Its an order.''
Hotaru: ''...Fine! *Mumble*''
Kiyoshi: ''Here goes! Time to prove how brave i am!''
The entred the mansion.
A boy and girl stod there to greet them.
The girl had short red hair, green eyes, and was short but still not as young as she apeared.
The boy, had short blond'ish hair, big green eyes, and had kind face.
Isamu: ''Nice to meet you, Are you the spirits?''
Boy: ''No, no, we have lived here since our parents died. And this place has been haunted by demons it was built.
Girl: ''Are you spirits?''
Sakura: ''I'm not... I am priestess Sakura Etsuko.'' (Etsu means ''Joy'' and Ko means ''Child'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Hotaru: ''I am a half demon, named, Hotaru wingsong.''
Kiyoshi: ''I am a dragon, named, Kiyoshi Hanako.'' (Hana means ''Flower'' and Ko means ''Child'' in Japanese!!!!!!!)
Isamu: ''I'm a wolf demon named Isamu... I dont know my last name...''
Girl: ''I am Chiyo Chou.'' (Chi means ''Thousand'' and Yo means ''Generations'' In Japanese!!!!!!! And Chou means ''Butterfly'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Boy: ''I am Daisuke Chou.'' (Dai means ''Large/Great'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Isamu: ''So, your siblings?''
Chiyo and Daisuke: ''Yes!''
Chiyo: ''I hope you enjoy your stay here, you can even spend the night if you want to.''
Everybody started to look at Isamu.
Isamu: ''Stop looking at me like i'm saying, no... I say, Thank you for your hospitality.''
Daisuke: ''Great! I'll show you to the guest rooms.''
3 Hours Later...
Daisuke, Kiyoshi and Isamu is in the living room, the rest is upstairs.
Daisuke: ''Your a lucky guy, Isamu.''
Isamu: ''How so?''
Daisuke: ''Traveling with a group of girls... I wish i was you...''
Isamu: ''It never accured to me.''
Daisuke: ''What?! Your kidding, right?''
Isamu: ''Nope...''
Kiyoshi: ''What a pervert that guy is.''
Daisuke: ''Aw come'on! Its how i roll!''
Kiyoshi: ''Besides we're not even the same species!''
Daisuke: ''But still...''
Kiyoshi: ''I bet you even think of your sister pervertedly!''
Daisuke: ''Hell no! Now your the one who has a sick mind.
Isamu: ''Daisuke, theres no point in arguing with her.''
Kiyoshi: ''See! Ha!''
Daisuke: ''I still say your a lucky guy, cause even my sister have taken a liking to you.''
Kiyoshi: ''How cute!''
Isamu: ''Wait, What?''
Daisuke: ''You heard me.''
Isamu: ''Sorry, i didn't hear, i wasen't listening.''
Isamu saw 2 fox ears sick out of Daisukes head.
Isamu: ''Your a kitsune?''
Daiskue: ''*Gasp!*''
A fox tail came out aswell.
Isamu: ''Well, well, you were the demons after all!''
Daisuke: ''Its true, we are the demons... Please dont kill us... The people who summond us died, not our parents... They were too weak to dismiss us before they died, so we have to wait for someone else to take their place, before we are allowed to leave...''
Isamu: ''I wont kill you... If fact, I'll take their place.''
Daisuke: ''Huh?... Really?''
Isamu: ''Yeah... But, get up of the floor you look pathetic down there.''
Daisuke: ''Thank you so much!''
Isamu: ''Well its only right, you were so nice to us anyway.''
Sakuras voice: ''You have changed alot from when we first met you Isamu.''
The others came in...
Isamu: ''Your right! I'm going soft! Whats going on!?''
Hotaru: ''Shall we set of?''
Daisuke: ''Hehehe! Isamu, remember the time i said, your a lucky guy?''
Isamu: ''Yeah?''
Daisuke: ''Now i'm a lucky guy too!''
Kiyoshi: ''Pervert...''
Chiyo came out from behind Sakura, Also with fox tail and ears.
Chiyo: ''Yeah... My brother is the world biggest perv...''
Daisuke: ''Cut me some slack!''
Isamu: ''Can we just leave now?''
The set of...
But they got ambushed by Makoto.
Makoto: ''Get ready to taste the power of the new and, even if it is impossible, Improved Makoto the great!''
Makoto drew a sword that looked just like heartless.
Isamu: ''Where did you get that?!''
Makoto: ''A snake gave it to me!-But thats beside the point, lets fight!''
Isamu: ''A snake?... Whatever lets just get this over with!''
Makoto came charging with his sword.
Isamu tried to stop it with his sword but got knocked back when the swords collided!
The fought for a while and Isamu got knocked back again and again!
Then Isamu fell.
And to land the final blow Makoto slashed randomly in the air!
But isamu was too weak to get out of the way.
But then Chiyo took the blow instead and both her arm and legs got torn of!
Daisuke: ''Sis!!!!!!!''
Chiyo wasen't moving or breathing.
isamu's face had no expression.
Isamu: ''...''
Isamu: ''...''
Isamu: ''...''
Isamu: ''Chiyo... Why... Why for me?''
Isamu transformed into a wolf!
And he was pissed of!
Isamu: ''Grrr!... You'll pay for this Makoto!... Pay with your life!... You must die!... DIE!!!!!!!''
He charged Makoto with anger and bloodthirst in his eyes!!!!!!!

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Sunday, May 10, 2009

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 7 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Ruby'' *Unanimated*


Chapter Seven: Kitsune No Ai Vs Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii!

The chapter starts with Hotaru, Kiyoshi, Sakura And Hotaru sitting next to eachother against a rock sleeping.
Sakura wakes up.
Sakura: ''Isamu, its morning
Isamu wakes up.
Isamu: ''What? Already?''
Hotaru wakes up.
Hotaru: ''An other day, one day closer to death.
Kiyoshi wakes up quickly with her eyes wide open.
Kiyoshi: ''Somethings coming this way!''
Hotaru: ''You had a dreem didn't you?''
Isamu smells the air.
Isamu: ''No... Something is coming!''
10 Minutes ago somewhere else!!!!!!!
An elf with a fox in his lap is sitting by a tree.
Ruby: ''This is the life, dontcha think?''
Ryou: ''Heh, yeah.''
Ruby: ''I've been meaning to ask you... Whats a dark elf?''
Ryou: ''*Sigh*''
Ruby: ''Its ok if you dont wanna talk about it!''
Ryou: ''Dont worry, i can talk about it.
Ryou: ''A normal elf can control sprits and use fire and ice magic. A dark elf has the power to use fire and shadow magic, and also can destroy the minds of demons who's blood the have tasted.''
Ryou: ''And as you know i'm a dark elf.''
Ruby: ''They dont sound so evil.''
Ryou: ''They have an evil power deep within thier souls, thats released at some times... mine is always released... I released the day the Ruby Crystal took over me.''
Ruby: ''But, your not evil...''
Ryou: ''I wonder about that...''
Ruby: ''I smell demon!''
Ryou: ''Is it Aimi?''
Ruby: ''No, its a dragon, a half demon, a human and a very evil demon.''
Ryou: ''Lets go!''
They ran awhile and they came to a place with a wicked aura around it... it was because one of the demons.
They also saw a human, with long white hair, green eyes and wearing a white dress.
Isamu: ''No... Something is coming!''
Isamu drew his sword.
Isamu: ''Come out! Heartless and i will crush you!
Hotaru: ''Kiyoshi, do you know what he ment by heartless?''
Kiyoshi: ''No, Hotaru, i have no idea... What about you Sakura?''
Isamu: ''Oh, thats right i never told you, i named my sword heartless.''
Isamu: ''I smell a fox!''
Ryou: ''Hello there, demon.
Isamu: ''My name is Isamu... And where the fox?''
Ruby: ''Right, here!''
Ryou: ''What are you doing so close to the elf village?''
Isamu: ''I see theres a village close by... I just hope that village doesen't get in our way then, heh.''
Ryou drew his sword!
Ryou: ''I wont let you pass!''
Isamu: ''Ok, i'll just kill you and be on my way then!''
Ryou and isamu charged eachother!!!!!!!
The slashed at the same time and thier swords met!
Ryou thinking: ''What is that incredible power i felt!''
Isamu thinking: ''I underestimated him, he's strong!''
the slashed swords again and then they tried to stab eachother but the tip of their swords met and struck their blades from their hands!
Isamu: ''Hotaru now!''
Ryou: ''Ruby now!''
Hotaru transformed into a raven and fired a fire ball!
Ruby used fox fire!
the blast collided and took eachother out!
then Ryou and Isamu fired a beam of fire from both their hands!
The beams hit eachother!
they struggled to overpower eachother!
Then Kiyoshi transformed into her dragon form and tried to help!
but then Aimi came and kicked Kiyoshi!
Aimi: ''Heh, its time for me to join the party!''
Aimi and Kiyoshi started to fight!
And Ruby and Hotaru did too!
Sakura just stod there and looked.
But suddenly Ryou got over powered by Isamu and to dodge it, Ryou jumped up and threw a knife that went through Isamus hand.
Isamu: ''Argh! Darn you!''
He took the knife and threw it back!
Ryou ducked it and picked it up.
Ryou: ''Heh, now your doomed.''
The others stoped fighting and looked at them.
Ryou licked a bit Isamus blood of the blade.
Ruby: ''Yes, i understand!''
Ryou: ''I say... Die!''
Isamu: ''Aaaaaarghhh!... You-You're a dark elf!''
Isamu held his hands on his head!
Sakura: ''By all my power!... Save Isamu from his torture!''
Isamus pain stoped.
He suddenly apeared behind Ryou.
Isamu: ''I say... YOU, die!''
He was just about to kill Ryou when a smoke bomb exploded and a shadow apeared in it!
Voice: ''Its the awesome, cool, amazing, outstanding and fantastic... Makoto the great!''
Sakura: ''You must be joking!''
Isamu: ''Lets withdraw... Makoto just ruinded the mood... We'll fight again...''
Ryou: ''My names Ryou...''
Isamu and his team ran away!
So did Ryou, Ruby and Aimi!
Makoto: ''How dare they leave when the most interesting part came, i mean i was in it!''
Meanwhile...
Ryou: ''I will...''
Meanwhile...
Isamu: ''Get you!''
Meanwhile...
Ryou: ''Cause I am!''
Meanwhile...
Isamu: ''Cause I am!''
Ryou and Isamu at the same time: ''Stronger!!!!!!!''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Saturday, May 9, 2009

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 6 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Sakura Tree''


Chapter Six: Makoto... He sucks...!

Sakura: ''I've been outside... For the first time in 8 years... I should have enjoyed it more....... The villiage havent changed since i last was there...''
Then Eddy came through the door!
Eddy: ''Sakura, We found you a fiance!''
Sakura: ''Wha-Wha-Wha-What!?''
Eddy: ''Your getting married next week!''
Sakura: ''Bu-But!''
Eddy: ''Makoto! Come in here!'' (Makoto means ''Sencerity'' In Japanese!!!!!!! Right?)
Then a middle aged man walked in the door.
Makoto: ''You'll be mine next week... I'll be gentle, Heh.
Sakura almost threw up.
Makoto: ''See ya next week.''
Makoto left the room.
Sakura: ''Father, I'm NOT going to marri-''
She got slapped.
Eddy: ''You will!!!!!!!''
Eddy left the room...
Sakura held her hand at the place she was slapped...
Sakura thinking: ''I MUST escape!''
Meanwhile...
Kiyoshi: ''Are we there yet?''
Isamu: ''What do you think! Where NOT there stop asking!!!!!!!''
Isamu: ''Geez''
5 Minutes later.
Hotaru: ''Isamu?''
Isamu: ''Oh come'on! What is it now!''
Hotaru: ''Where here.''
Isamu. ''I can see that...''
They saw Makoto.
Makoto: ''Who these fair ladies? Why are you traveling with such a low life? Come with me, Makoto the great and i'll rock your world!''
Hotaru: ''Premission to ''rock his world'' Isamu?''
Isamu: ''Premission Granted.''
Hotaru punched Makoto right in the face.
Makoto: ''How dare you turn me down woman!''
Isamu: ''Kiyoshi Now!''
Kiyoshi burned Makoto with her fire breath!
Makoto: ''Oh noes, my noes!''
Isamu: ''You want to taste my wrath?... Heres a hint: ''You dont!'' Heh!''
Makoto stod up and ran away with the last shread of his pride, He was owned 3 times in a row, he must be down for good.
Hotaru: ''Couldn't we just have killed him, and make everybody happy.''
Isamu: ''We dont want to make a scene.''
Kiyoshi: ''We just did.''
Isamu: ''Dont turn this around.''
They cept walking, and all the guards on the way dropped their wepons and ran away, cause they recognised him.
They heard some gossip by leting Hotaru talk to the birds.
They got to know Sakura was getting married, and to who.
Isamu let Hotaru and Kiyoshi check out the market, while he went to the church.
Finnaly he got to Sakuras room.
Sakura: ''There must be some way to escape.''
The door got broken in.
Isamu: ''Come along if you want...''
Sakura: ''You came for me! You saved me again!''
Isamu: ''You dont wanna get married to that Makoto guy, right''
Sakura: ''No way!''
Isamu: ''Then get on my back.''
Sakura climed on his back and said: ''Sorry, if i'm heavy...''
Isamu: ''Your not, your much easier to carry then a dead body.''
Sakura: ''I dont know if that was a compliment or an insult.''
Isamu: ''Me niether.''
They escaped and ran passed the market.
Isamu: ''Hotaru, Kiyoshi Come'on!''
They ran out of the village...
later guards reported that Isamu defeated them and kidnapped Sakura.
Eddy: ''Why The Hell Didn't you stop them!''
Guard: ''He was to strong he overpowered us!''
Meanwhile...
Isamu: ''We're gonna be in alot of trubble!''
Sakura hugged Isamu.
Sakura: ''Thanks for getting me out of there, Now i can be outside once again!''
Sakura: ''But, why?... Why are you being so nice?''
Isamu: ''It wasen't for you... I just dont want the Makoto creep to have his way, and i dont want your father to have his way...''
Sakura: ''Hehe, But thanks anyway...''
Hotaru: ''Guess you'll be traveling with us.''
Kiyoshi: ''Yay, more people!''
Hotaru: ''Your the oldest one here and you act like a baby, Kiyoshi...''
Kiyoshi looked like she was going to cry.
Kiyoshi: ''You think i'm old?''
Hotaru: ''No, No, I didn't meant it like that? I'm 17.''
Kiyoshi: ''...?''
Hotaru: ''Thats 2 years younger than you...''
Kiyoshi: ''...?''
Hotaru: ''Never mind forget i said anything...''
Meanwhile...
Eddy: ''Makoto your not only a part of the highest ranked family in these lands, but your also a pro Demon Slayer.''
Makoto: ''Yes, that is exacly what i just finnished telling you.''
Eddy: ''Now go! My daughters fait rests in your hands! Who knows what kind of evil and sinfull things that demon is putting her through?!''
Makoto: ''Understod! I will save your daugther and prevent the demon from harming her! I just hope i'm not to late!''
Meanwhile...
Isamu: ''Want some water?''
Sakura: ''Yes, please.''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 5 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Isamu''
Disclaimer: I Did Not Draw This Picture!!!!!!! Blazing-Wolf On Photobucket Did!!!!!!!


Chapter Five: Heartless?

Sakura: ''No! Let go of me i dont want to go back into that room!''
Eddy: ''Thats not your choise!''
Meanwhile...
Its raining outside...
Kiyoshi: ''Where are we going?''
Isamu: ''Nowhere, i still have unfinnished buisness at the village...''
Hotaru: ''With Sakura?''
Isamu: ''No, with the priest...''
Kiyoshi: ''Oh, i get it!''
Isamu: ''Its not like that! I ment, the time when he punched me, i still haven't hit him back!''
Hotaru: ''When did he hit you?''
Isamu: ''It was before i met you two.''
Hotaru: ''Oh!''
Isamu: ''Lets stop here for the night...''
Kiyoshi: ''But its rai-''
Isamu: ''Under the tree...''
Kiyoshi: ''But that not very good protection...''
Isamu: ''Your a dragon, right, how come your complaing about rain?''
Kiyoshi: ''I never flew in the rain, i stayed in a cave...''
Hotaru: ''And i'll catch a cold!''
Isamu: ''Grr... Deal with it!''
Kiyoshi: ''Thats not very nice...''
Hotaru: ''You said it...''
Isamu: ''Well i'm not very nice!''
Time passes...
Hotaru: ''I'm f-f-f-freezing...''
Kiyoshi: ''Me-Me too...''
Isamu stod up and his hands started to glow!
He shoot the light at the ground, and some kind of tent shaped power shield came up from the ground!
Hotaru: ''How did you do that?!''
Isamu: ''I dont know.''
Hotaru: ''How can you not know-''
Isamu: ''Stop asking questions before i kill you!''
Hotaru: ''You wouldn't!''
Isamu drew his sword and pointed it against Hotaru.
Isamu: ''Watch me...''
Hotaru: ''I-Is this cause i'm half human?''
Isamu: ''No!... And what did i say about asking questions!''
Kiyoshi: ''Leave her alone, she hasen't done anything!''
Isamu: ''Hmph.''
He put his sword back in his holder...
Hotaru: ''You could kill me and you wouldn't care, right!''
Isamu: ''I could kill anyone and just shake it of a second later... Anyone.''
Hotaru: ''I'm starting to regret making that deal... My life is in danger around you.''
Kiyoshi: ''Deal?''
Hotaru: ''I said that i would become his servant if he spared my life the day we met... He accepted... I'm starting to regret suggesting it...''
Isamu: ''You dont have to sick to it if you dont want to... Its your choise to leave or not.''
Hotaru: ''Well then i'm leaving!''
Hotaru turned into a raven and flew away...
Kiyoshi: ''Oh, why did it have to turn out like this?''
Isamu: ''Its your choise to stay and leave too.''
Kiyoshi: ''I dont have anywhere else to go, i have to stay.''
They heard a screem!
They ran there and found Hotaru in her raven form on the ground with an arrow through her back!
They saw a hunter with a mask not far from there.
Hunter: ''Yes, i got it!''
Isamu: ''You prepared to die...''
Hunter: ''Its you!''
The hunter took his mask of and they saw it was sakuras brother!
Isamu: ''Oh, its you, hi, but anyway, you'll pay for harming Hotaru!''
Sakuras brother used some kind of smoke bomb and got away!
Isamu went and picked up Hotaru, and took the arrow out of her.
Hotaru opened her eyes.
Hotaru: ''Isamu... You stod up for me?... You were going to fight... For me?''
Isamu: ''Yeah, so what?''
Hotaru: ''I'm glad... Master...''
Isamu: ''Master?''
Hotaru: ''You are my new master...''
Kiyoshi put her hand on Hotaru and her wound healed.
Kiyoshi: ''Now, you'll be as good as new.''
Hotaru turned into her human form.
Isamu: ''Lets go...''
and then they walked away silently in the rain...

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Friday, May 8, 2009

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 4 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Dragon''

Chapter Four: Dragons, Names And Jokes!

Isamu had been arested and taken to the execution chamber...
Sakura: ''I told you... Try to avoid killing it... But when it begged for its life you just laughted and slaughtered the poor thing...''
Isamu: ''Hmhmhm...''
Sakura: ''Are you a monster!?''
Isamu: ''It'll all work out, you'll see...''
Sakura: ''I cant bail you out of this one, they would never listen to me...''
Isamu: ''I got it all worked out... As i said, you'll see. Hmhmhmmm''
2 minutes later they are about to hang him... But then Isamu raises his rope tied hands to the sky and a fire ball comes out of nowhere in the sky and burns the rope away!
The raven came flying in, injured, but in good enough condition to fly around and attack well.
Isamu: ''Let the killing start!''
Sakura went infront of Isamu.
Sakura: ''Isamu... Stop this madness! Theres no need for anyone to die!''
Isamu: ''Madness?... Hmph! Sakura move!''
Sakura: ''No! I refuse! You have to go through me cause i'm not allowing anyone to hurt my family!''
The raven landed on Isamu's arm...
Raven: ''Isamu the're coming!''
Isamu: ''More guards?''
Raven: ''No, Dragons! Th-They are coming!''
Isamu jumped up and out of the open roof exucution chamber.
Sakura: ''Oh no dragons! Guards warn everybody!''
Guards: ''Understod priestess Sakura!''
Isamu stod outside ready to face the dragons!
They came flying in, 5 of them!
Dragons: ''Scriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!''
Isamu charged them and slashed one with his sword!
He injured it in the neck it fell and landed on the ground. It was the smallest one that fell!
The others started to use thier fire breath on the village and burning down some houses!
HighPriest: ''Whats with the sudden number of demon and monster attacks!?''
The guards tryed to fight one the dragons but one by one they fell, while Isamu had defeated 4 of them without a scratch.
Now he had to fight the last one!
He charaged it!
It charaged him!
They collided tail vs sword!
And...
The dragon fell!
After the fight, Isamu went to the first one he struck.
Isamu: ''Its still alive!''
HighPriest: ''Kill It!''
Sakura: ''Dont kill it!''
Isamu: ''Come'on high priest!''
HighPriest: ''My name is Eddy!''
Isamu: ''You call yourself a priest!? You are directly telling me to kill a pure beast, while you know all life is worth something!''
Highpriest: ''You kill for fun, dont talk to me about that!''
Eddy Shut his eyes.
Isamu: ''Dont you, shut your eyes in silence!... I'm a demon, your a priest... Theres a big difference!''
Eddy: ''Besides that beast isint pure, it tryed to destroy our village!''
Isamu: ''This dragon is pure, its just being controlled by a poison that can control others... And paralyze them when they are disobaying orders.''
Isamu started to lick the small dragon wound, curing the poison for some reason i dont know... What?!... Com'on! How am i supposed to know! I'm just a voice! (4Th Wall Broken!!!!!!!)
Dragon: ''What... Are You... Doing...''
Isamu: ''How long have you been awake?''
Dragon: ''Since the priest said his name... Wheres my family?''
Isamu: ''... They are dead... I killed them...''
The dragon looked surpried and scared!
Dragon: ''You-you-you-you d-d-d-did -wha-wha-wha-what!?''
Isamu: ''You heard me...''
The dragon had a sad face like it was crying, but no tears came out.
Dragon: ''End it!...''
Isamu: ''Huh?''
Dragon: ''End my life whats the point of living when i'm all alone in the world!''
Isamu: ''Fine...''
Sakura: ''You-you cant! Its just a child!''
Isamu: ''Hmph, It wanted to die... Besides its one year older than me its 19...''
Sakura: ''How can you tell?''
Isamu: ''I can do many pointless things that would not benifit in anyother situation than this...''
Dragon: ''Quit messing around and kill me!''
Raven: ''How can you ''Wany'' to die? I fear death more than most things!''
Dragon: ''I dont want to be alone in my life...''
Isamu: ''I can take care of you...''
Dragon: ''How can you say something like that!? You killed my parents!''
Sakura: ''How about I take ca-''
Eddy: ''Dont you even think about it!''
Isamu: ''The poisons gone and you can move again...''
Dragon: ''...''
Isamu put his hand on the dragons chest...
And it was like he passed out standing while holding his hand there.
Sakura: ''Whats going on?''
Raven: ''He has entered the heart of the dragon, he's trying to earn the dragons forgivness...''
Eddy: ''He's good i must admit...''
Sakura: ''You've become quite friendly with him dad.''
Eddy: ''No i still want him dead.''
Sakura: ''Oh...''
The raven entered her human form.
Sakura: ''Is that you?!''
Raven was now a girl, with long black hair, short and blood red eyes, that feels so powerfull that you feel like you get sucked into them just by staring at them.
Raven: ''Whats the matter, never seen a mix human/demon before?''
Isamu wkoe up!
And he gave the dragon a long hug and while he did that, the dragon transformed into a human form: A girl with blue eyes, long blue hair and dragon wings and tail.
Then she woke up in Isamus arms.
Raven: ''Looks like he did it! He aquired the dragons forgivness!''
Dragon: ''My name is Kiyoshi...'' (Kiyoshi Means ''Pure'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Isamu went over to the fallen dragons and toutched them with a glowing hand and they disapeared one by one...
Isamu: ''Rest in peace...''
Sakura thinking: ''I never knew Isamu could be so kind.''
Raven: ''Not that is matters at this point but... My name is Hotaru!'' (Hotaru Means ''Firefly'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Isamu: ''I'll be going for now... See ya...''
Then Isamu, Kiyoshi and Hotaru walked out of the village...
Eddy Thinking: ''I'll get you Isamu, you'll die...''
Sakura Thinking: ''Is kind... But he just dont show it very often...''
Sakura Thinking: ''....... Isamu.......''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 3 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Raven''

Chapter Three: The Wolf Vs The Raven!

Isamu and Sakura heard trubble at the village!
Sakura: ''Whats going on?!''
Isamu: ''The people of the village will die, a demon is attacking... I can smell it.''
Sakura: ''We gotta help!''
Isamu: ''I could care less.''
Sakura: ''My final order is for you to help them!!!!!!!''
Isamu: ''... Understod...''
When they got to the village they saw a Raven shooting fire at the houses, and pecking peoples eyes out!
Isamu Drew his sword!
Isamu: ''Its time... To slit your throat!''
Sakura: ''Try to avoid killing it, you might be able to find a peacefull resulution!''
Isamu jumped up against the raven, but it ducked!
Sakura: ''Why, did this happend?... Whats with the sudden demon attack?... Why is it attacking us?
Then Sakuras father came...
HighPriest: ''Sakura there you are i was so worried that you got killed by the demon!''
HighPriest: ''Our guards are out to look for you!
Then Sakuras brother came out of the building!
Sakuras Brother: ''I had a warning vision: I saw a wolf eating a Raven!''
HighPriest: ''This is not the time!''
Sakura: ''You said ''Raven'', Right?''
Hayato: ''Yes.''
Sakura Thinking: ''Could Isamu be a wolf?''
Isamu: ''Pathetic Raven why are you doing this? you should be out killing unsuspecting targets...''
Raven: ''Its revenge! On the humans!''
Isamu started change... He started to transform!
Isamu: ''Grr... Grr... Heh if thats the case, i'll finnish this quickly!''
Isamu had now transformed into a wolf!
Sakura: ''I knew it!''
Hayato: ''Thats the demon that attacked us before!''
Sakura: ''He saved us!''
HighPriest: ''Lets hope the wolf and raven kills eachother!''
Sakura Thinking: ''They are not even listening...''
The Isamu had the raven by the neck and was ready to kill it.''
Isamu: ''Before i kill you... Tell me exacly why you are doing this!''
Raven: ''It happend about week ago...''
(Flashback!!!!!!!)
A Girl is inside a big mansion with a man...
Mans voice: ''Do it!''
Girls Voice: ''Master... Please dont do this...''
Man voice: ''I saved you from death and and raised you! you'll listen to me!''
Girls voice: ''I... I dont want to...''
Man voice: ''Do it! Take of your clothes!''
Raven narrating: ''This went on for days... This was when i was a human...''
Raven narrating: ''Untill i had enough...''
Girls voice: ''I i've enough... This ends today!''
Mans voice: ''You think you have a say in the matter?''
Girls voice: ''You Die!''
Raven narrating: ''I took a knife and sabbed him... Untill he stoped breathing and moving... And i want all the humans to pay... They call demons evil, when they are the ones thats evil!... So i asked demons for help... And with their power i now have the power to change between human form and raven form...''
(Flashback Ends!!!!!!!)
Raven: ''Spare me and i'll leave this village...''
Isamu let go of the ravens neck...
Isamu: ''Hahaha, You thought that a sad story could save your life... Pathetic!''
Isamu sunk his teeth in the ravens neck so that the blood started to gush, he took the raven by its neck ran into the forest and came back after 10 minutes without the raven, and was in his human form..With his mouth covered in blood.
HighPriest: ''Does this prove to you that demons are evil creatures Sakura?''
Sakura was chocked over what Isamu had done.
Sakura: ''Y-Yes.''
Isamu: ''Heh, now... Whats your next move priest?''
The guards sent out to look for Sakura came back.
HighPriest: ''Guards arrest the demon, but be careful its dangerous!''
The tied up Isamu...
Isamu Thinking: ''Now its up to you Raven... Its your turn...''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!