Saturday, May 16, 2009

Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii (The Demon's Pure Soul) Chapter 9 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Picture: ''Heartless''




Chapter Nine: Fox-Wing! Dragon-Slash! Demon-Raid! Light Of The Razor Blade! There i just explained the whole episode just like that!

Isamu (Wolf form) charged Makoto with anger and bloodthirst in his eyes!
He got knocked away like nothing!
And he was still weak from the first battle and couldn't go on.
Isamu had just abandoned all hope, when.
Chiyo started to move.
Isamu turned back into human form.
Isamu: ''You're alive!''
Chiyo: ''I'm happy that you care...''
Isamu: ''Why?... Why did you take the hit?... Because of it, your half dead.''
Chiyo: ''You must attack me with your sword!''
Isamu: ''What?! No, i cant!''
Chiyo: ''Its the only way to win... I saw that your sword has a power that allows the user to fuse it with whomever he choses... And if you do... *Cough*... You will become stronger than ever before, and as an added bonus i'll live.''
Isamu: ''... Fine then!''
He stabbed Chiyo!
Isamu: ''Heartless... Show me what kind of power you have!''
Chiyo and heartless started to glow!
Chiyo transformed into a liquid form and went into heartless.
Heartless started to change shape!
And it became a sword made only of blades resembles fox tails!
Isamu: ''Foxswing...''
Isamu: ''Lets rock!''
He charged Makoto and slashed against him!
He tried to parry!
But he got knocked back into a tree!
Makoto: ''I give up!''
He ran away.
Isamu's sword heartless became normal and Chiyo came out in her fox form.
Chiyo: ''Isamu... You have mastered the power of Knightmare.''
Isamu: ''Knightmare?''
Chiyo: ''Fusing swords-''
Daisuke: ''Sis! Your ok!''
Chiyo: ''You didn't think i would die that easy-''
They heard a big explosion!
Makoto came back with an even bigger sword, but still a Heartless.
Isamu: ''I see... your back... Chiyo, does this power work on anyone?''
Chiyo: ''Yes, i'm 100% sure.''
Kiyoshi: ''Then its my turn!''
Isamu slashed Kiyoshi with the sword!
The same thing that happend to Chiyo happend, but this time the sword turned into two dragon heads, with an axe in the middle!
Isamu: ''This time i'm wielding... Dragonslash!''
Isamu knocked down Makoto like he was a volley ball... Of course volley balls dont exist in old japan...
Makoto ran away and came back later like last time with a bigger sword.
This time Isamu tried it on Hotaru!
The sword turned into a sword, with 5 blades and 2 blades next to them.
Isamu turned the blades into tetacles and tangled up Makoto.
Isamu: ''Heh, its time to face the wrath of demonraid!''
He trew Makoto away.
Then he came back later with an even bigger sword.
Makoto: ''This time you wont win!!!!!!!''
Isamu: ''Sakura, its your turn...''
Isamu slashed Sakura and the sword turned into a sword with out a blade just a sharp looking light.
Isamu cut Makoto's Heartless in half!
Isamu: ''You cant beat, Light Of The Razor Blade!''
Makoto ran away and this time he didn't come back.
Meanwhile...
Makoto: ''Orochi No Yami please forgive me!'' (Orochi No Yami Means ''Snake's Darkness'' In Japanese!!!!!!!)
Snake: ''You get one more chance... If you dont dispose of Isamu this time... I'll just have to dispose of you!!!!!!!''
Meanwhile...
Ryou had seen the battle between Isamu and Makoto.
Ryou: ''How did Makoto become so strong... But Isamu still outclassed him... And if i'm going to fight Isamu i better get stronger myself.''
Ruby: ''Dont worry... You wont lose, cause i got a plan... But we have to wait a month for it to work.''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

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