Monday, May 18, 2009

Shinigami No Jiigoku! (The Death God's Hell!) Chapter 1 / Script, Writing And Characters By Me!


Symbols: ''Shinigami''



Shinigami No Jiigoku! (The Death God's Hell!)
Intro!:
MalcolmX: ''This is the third part of the series of stories i've been writing! As you maybe already noticed all the stories are conected eachother. (Example: ''The characters from the first story, made a apearences in the second one! If any of the readers haven't read ''Kitsune No Ai'' and ''Oni No Kiyoi Tamashii'' that i wrote, i strongly recomend reading them first or some things might apear confusing to you in this story!) Story contains: blood, death, proof that women were unfairly opressed by men in old japan, japanse religion reffrences, making demons seem like good guys and swearing. So if you are under 12, reader disgression or adult supervision is adviced... LOL, Super Vision... Anyway... Enjoy The Story!''

Chapter One: Who will cure my pain?

The story starts with a small boy, around 8 years old, stabbing someone through the heart with a sword.
And then killing another one not too far away.
The boy is smiling.
The boy looked at another person.
Boy: ''Are you the one?... Are you the one who will save me from this pain?''
Person: ''Begone demon!!!!!!!''
Boy: ''So you're not... Then Die!''
And the boy killed that person too, ending up covered in blood, with a smile on his face.
10 Years Later, At A Castle Somewhere.
An emperor is being controled by an evil male kitsune named Fushei disguised in a woman form. (Has no meaning in japanese!!!!!!!)
Fushei: ''I must find Reisei and Reishi... And make them mine forever... Only then, will i be able to control their power.'' (Reishi and Reisei doesn't mean anything in japanese!!!!!!!)
A guard came in and Fushei quickly flew behind the emperor.
Guard: ''Someone is attacking the city, we have reasons to believe that they are heading this way!''
Fushei speaking through the emperors body: ''Send all our soldiers to the castle gate! We must defend the castle at all cost!''
Guard. ''But what about the city?''
Fushei through emperors body: ''Are you questioning your emperor?!''
Guard: ''S-Sorry your magiesty! I-I understand!''
The town was attacked by the same boy from the start of the story, but this time he was about 18 years old.
A guard with high class armor came out of nowhere.
Boy: ''Are you the one who will cure my pain?''
The boy slowly walked towards the guard.
Guard: ''Whats your name?''
Boy: ''My name is Akurei, nice to meet you.'' (Akurei means ''Evil Spirit'' in japanese and is normaly not used as a name!!!!!!!)
Guard: ''I cant say the same to meet you, cause of the time and place we met... My name is Sir Katsuo!'' (Katsu means ''Victory'' in japanese and O means ''Hero/Manly'' in japanese!!!!!!!)
Katsuo: ''I was hoping that i could avoid a fight with you.''
Akurei: ''Are you the one to cure my pain?''
Katsuo: ''Where are you in pain?''
Akurei: ''If you were the one you would know that... Now Die!''
He came at Katsuo with a sword!
Katsuo stopped the sword with his sword!
Akurei and Katsuo collided swords!
Akurei jumped back.
Akurei: ''Hehehe... Hahahahahahaha... Mahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!! This is fun! Dont let this end yet i'm enjoying myself!
Katsuo: ''Sorry, but i have to wrap this up!... Farewell Kid!!!!!!!''
He charged Akurei!
Akurei got hit and fell down to the ground.
Katsuo checked for signs of life... But found none.
Katsuo: ''Sorry kid... Forgive me...''
He looked away.
Akurei: ''Dont be... I'm immortal!''
He looked back and got a kick in his face!
Akurei stod up again!
Katsuo: ''But!... You were dead!''
Akurei: ''You cant kill a shinigami that easy!'' (Shinigami means ''God of death'' in japanese!!!!!!!)
Katsuo: ''Shi-Shinigami!?... No... No, your not telling me the truth!... Why would a shinigami come to this world?''
Akurei: ''To find someone to take my pain away.''
Katsuo: ''What ''pain'' are you talking about?''
Akurei: ''You cant understand... You never can!!!!!!!''
Akurei suddenly apeared behind Katsuo and stabbed his sword into Katsuo's back!
Katsuo fell to the ground and Akurei kept going further in to the city killing anyone and destroying everything that got in his way.
Katsuo: ''Is... Is all hope lost if he dont find the one he's looking for?''
Katsuo passed out.
Akurei: ''The pain... Why does it hurt so... Whats hurting me... When will the one who can cure me come!?... It hurts!''

To Be Continued!!!!!!!

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